Saturday, December 17, 2011

Story Draft 3


People disrespect others every day. It is appalling. When we see people bullying others, most would act as a spectator. When one is on the other end of that bullying, they want support. They want nothing more than the backup of their friends. The reasons behind bullying are naive and unjust. “ Give me your lunch money,” “ Get away from Planned Parenthood, they kill babies.” The atrocities that go on in today’s world lie within the government. There can never be enough support for third party organizations that promote a more efficient health care system. This is the story of a health center that has seen the bad and the good, the violence and the peace, and ultimately the better side of every person.
 The Planned Parenthood health centers are the government’s tentative solution to health issues in the United States. On a brisk Sunday afternoon, three African American women entered the center seeking help. They had no idea the mission statement of Planned Parenthood, they just needed immediate medical attention. The girls had been victim to a sexual assault led by a gang. The girls were worried. They had never been in this sort of situation and based on their financial background they would never be able to afford health care.
Imagine being a part of such a vicious crime. The adolescence is gone, the minds of people will be filled with gruesome memories of a tragic event. Not knowing how to cope with society, the girls turned to the nearest form of help they could think of, their peers.
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It was dark. There was nothing to be seen throughout the whole park. All that could be heard was crickets chirping, dogs barking, and gangsters prowling. The moon was at its brightest, lighting up the whole path through Sindred Park. It was a typical night for Shandra, Kendra and Lafia.
They work in a diner. They have grown up poor and are trying to make it in this hard-knock life. After working an eighteen-hour shift, the three sisters headed home. With their hardships only making them stronger, they weren’t afraid of anything.
“Bring it on!” Lafia the youngest of the three sisters claimed. Lafia’s father left when she was just a little girl. She needed a protective figure that her drugged out mother couldn’t provide. She was a persistent child, always wanting the best for her family. She never complained, just brought in the bacon and hoped for the best.
Shandra, on the other hand, is more cautious. The three girls share the same mother, but each a different father. The age is not a factor between the girls. They are all best friends and they fend for each other. Sandra always prepares herself for the task at hand and is never too quick to jump into any situation.
Kendra is the complete opposite of the other two. Some would jump to the conclusion that she is simply suffering from middle child syndrome and is compensating for her sisters quietness by rebelling.
            The girls act as one. They work together, live together, and enjoy the simple things of life together. Ever since Shandra was five years old, she has been fending for herself.  At the mere age of twelve she came to the realization that her mother would be incapable to properly provide for the girls as they age and try to cope with society. Shandra’s first job was delivering food to apartments in the most dangerous neighborhood in New York. The Bronx is no place for young girl to find her place in life. Imagine having to support yourself and your two sisters while trying to learn long division. A burden of such importance should not be left to a young girl. At the age of twenty-one she got her and her sisters a steady job at a local diner.
            Through many encounters with strange people, Shandra has built a tolerance to the basic principles of men. Over the years she has done everything possible to prevent her sisters from experiencing the pessimistic world they really live. In.
            “What are we having for dinner?” Kendra asked not realizing the stress it puts on Shandra.
            “We should try that new burrito place down the road” Lafia jumped to the idea. Little did she know, the “road” she referred to is the most dangerous road in all of New York and was full of pimps and prostitutes.
            “I think we’ll just have dinner with the Mclacks’ tonight, they invited us last week and they are only looking out for us,” Shandra proposed in order to keep the safety of the girls in mind.
            The Mclacks live in apartment 2b, which is right above theirs. They have two young boys, Jonny and Freddy, and one newborn girl. Johnny and Freddy’s parents, Mo'Nique and Devonte, have been living in the same building for over twenty years. They understand the area, especially how the area can have a negative effect on residents.


On Tuesday evening the girls ended their shift, stamped their time cards, and headed home. The most efficient way home for them is through Sindred Park. Normally, the park is functional twenty four-seven. The flow of people never stops which is why Shandra trusts the park to deliver them home safely.
Unable to keep track of the date, let alone their schoolwork, the girls proceed with their day as normal. They work a normal shift and head home. Little did they know it was September 11th, and most people were indoors with their families’ morning the death of those whom we lost.
Oblivious to this fact, Shandra, Kendra and Lafia proceed home through the park with little caution.
“How come there are no people in the park tonight Kendra?” Lafia innocently asked.
“There is probably just some special event nearby that attracted all the people” Kendra responded hoping that her fabrication reflected the truth.
“I don’t know why there aren’t any people in the park right now but I have a bad feeling. We need to hurry home” Shandra responded while her motherly instincts came about.
            “How you ladies doin’ tonight?” Latrel, a member of the local 6 feet under Prison gang, asked while approaching the girls with his crew.
            The 6 Feet Under Prison gang is the only gang around for miles. They run the streets like they own the place. They are known for their low tolerance to challenges and their abuse of innocent women. NYPD has opened many cases against the gang but because of their efficiency and clean up crew, evidence is nearly impossible to find, let alone link to them.
“We are just on our way home, we don’t want any trouble” Shandra stated as she stepped in front of her sisters.
“We aint’ looking for any trouble little Miss, we just wanna have a little fun” another gang member shouted as he grabbed Lafia’s arm.



PS. I know that it is taking a little while to get to the action and climax, but don't worry I'm exploring two different options because i don't want to be to graphic and i want to have a strong denounment and i can't do that unless something really bad happens here which makes the girls want to help other people in her situation. 

Tuesday, December 13, 2011

Draft 2


People disrespect others every day. It is appalling. When we see people bullying others, most would act as a spectator. When one is on the other end of that bullying, they want support. They want nothing more then the backup of their friends. The reasons behind bullying are naive and unjust. “ Give me your lunch money,” “ Get away from Planned Parenthood, they kill babies.” The atrocities that go on in today’s world lie within the government. There can never be enough support for third party organizations that support a more efficient health care system. This is the story of a health center that has seen the bad and the good, the violence and the peace, and ultimately the better side of every person.
 The Planned Parenthood health centers are the government’s tentative solution to health issues in the United States. On a brisk Sunday afternoon, four African American women entered the center seeking help. They had no idea the mission statement of Planned Parenthood, they just needed immediate medical attention. The girls had been victim to a sexual assault let by a gang. The girls were worried. They have never been in this sort of situation and based on their financial background they could never afford health care.
Imagine being a part of such a vicious crime. The adolescence is gone, all ones mind will be filled with is the gruesome memories of a tragic event. Not knowing how to cope with society, the girls turned to the nearest form of help they could think of, their peers.
____________________________________________________________________________________

It was dark. There was nothing to be seen or heard throughout the whole park. Crickets chirping, dogs barking, and gangsters prowling. The moon was at its brightest, lighting up the whole path through Sindred Park. It was a typical night for Shandra, Kendra and Lafia.
They work in a diner. They have grown up poor and are trying to make it in this hard-knock life. After working an eighteen-hour shift, the three sisters headed home. With their hardships only making them stronger, they weren’t afraid of anything.
“Bring it on!” Lafia the youngest of the three sisters claimed. Lafia’s father left when she was just a little girl. She needed a protective figure that her drugged out mother couldn’t provide. She was a persistent child, always wanting the best for her family. She never complained, just brought in the bacon and hoped for the best.
Shandra, on the other hand, is more cautious. The three girls share the same mother, but each a different father. The age is not a factor between the girls. They are all best friends and they fend for each other. Sandra always prepares herself for the task at hand and is never too quick to jump into any situation.
Kendra on the other hand is the complete opposite of the other two. Some would jump to the conclusion that she is simply suffering from middle child syndrome and is compensating for her sisters quietness by rebelling.
            The girls act as one. They work together, live together, and enjoy the simple things of life together. Ever since Shandra was five years old, she has been fending for herself. At the age of twenty-one she got her and her sisters a job at a local diner. At the mere age of twelve she came to the realization that her mother would be incapable to properly provide for the girls as they age and try to cope with society. Shandra’s first job was delivering food to apartments in the most dangerous neighborhood in New York. The Bronx is no place for young girl to find her place in life. Imagine having to support yourself and your two sisters while trying to learn long division. A burden of such importance should not be left to a young girl.
            Through many encounters with strange people, Shandra has built a tolerance to the basic principles of men. Over the years she has done everything possible to prevent her sisters from experiencing the pessimistic world they really live. In.
            “What are we having for dinner?” Kendra asked not realizing the stress it puts on Shandra.
            “We should try that new burrito place down the road” Lafia jumped to the idea. Little did she know, the “road” she referred to is the most dangerous road in all of New York and consisted of pimps and prostitutes.
            “I think we’ll just have dinner with the Mclacks tonight, they invited us last week and they are only looking out for us” Shandra proposed in order to keep the safety of the girls in mind.
            The Mclacks are a family that live in apartment 2b, right above them. The Mclacks have two young boys, Jonny and Freddy, and one newborn girl. Jonnny and Freddy’s parents, Mo'Nique and Devonte, have been living in the same building for over twenty years. 

Thursday, December 8, 2011

Volunteership Story


People disrespect others every day. It is appalling. When we see people bullying others, most would act as a spectator. When one is on the other end of that bullying, they want support. They want nothing more then the backup of their friends. The reasons behind bullying are naive and unjust. “ Give me your lunch money,” “ Get away from Planned Parenthood, they kill babies.” The atrocities that go on in today’s world lie within the government. There can never be enough support for third party organizations that support a more efficient health care system. This is the story of a health center that has seen the bad and the good, the violence and the peace, and ultimately the better side of every person.
 The Planned Parenthood health centers are the government’s tentative solution to health issues in the United States. On a brisk Sunday afternoon, four African American women entered the center seeking help. They had no idea the mission statement of Planned Parenthood, they just needed immediate medical attention. The girls had been victim to a sexual assault let by a gang. The girls were worried. They have never been in this sort of situation and based on their financial background they could never afford health care.
Imagine being a part of such a vicious crime. The adolescence is gone, all ones mind will be filled with is the gruesome memories of a tragic event. Not knowing how to cope with society, the girls turned to the nearest form of help they could think of, their peers.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________
It was dark. There was nothing to be seen or heard throughout the whole park. Crickets chirping, dogs barking, and gangsters prowling. The moon was at its brightest, lighting up the whole path through Sindred Park. It was a typical night for Shandra, Kendra and Lafia.
They work in a diner. They have grown up poor and are trying to make it in this hard-knock life. After working an eighteen-hour shift, the three sisters headed home. With their hardships only making them stronger, they weren’t afraid of anything.
“Bring it on!” Lafia the youngest of the three sisters claimed. Lafia’s father left when she was just a little girl. She needed a protective figure that her drugged out mother couldn’t provide. She was a persistent child, always wanting the best for her family. She never complained, just brought in the bacon and hoped for the best.
Shandra, on the other hand, is more cautious. The three girls share the same mother, but each a different father. The age is not a factor between the girls. They are all best friends and they fend for each other. Sandra always prepares herself for the task at hand and is never too quick to jump into any situation.
Kendra on the other hand is the complete opposite of the other two. Some would jump to the conclusion that she is simply suffering from middle child syndrome and is compensating for her sisters quietness by rebelling. 

Ventures



I have quite a few ideas on what I will do for Volunteership this semester. My first venture involves web design for the Voice of San Diego. I am great at it, and i am quite efficient. My second venture is at JA Cooley Museum. The museum is a non-profit owned by Ben's grandfather. While volunteering at one or both of theses places, I also intend on working with Planned Parenthood. Honestly, I am not super pumped about volunteership, but after the community service I did over the weekend, I can't wait to give back. 

Pb Recreation Center


On Saturday mornings, I volunteer at the Pacific Beach Rec Center as the assistant tennis coach for all morning lessons. I really love this volunteership because I get to have fun with kids and play my favorite sport at the same time. I have volunteered for about 6 weeks now, and each morning is basically the same. We are trying to get the kids coordinated and repetition is the best way to do so. We run the same normal drills, and I lead the group on a run before we start. I volunteer about five hours every Saturday morning, and I have recently been working with the adults and they have been preparing me for the High Tech tennis season. The work i do for the organization is helping the community because it gives everyone an opportunity to stay active an healthy. Rec centers are great places for kids to go play in a safe environment and pass time when parents are not able to look after them.

Time: 73 Hours

Planned Parenthood

I have been working very hard with Planned Parenthood and the PB Rec center these past few months and this post is documenting the extra hours I logged with Planned Parenthood. Over the course of the recent events, I have spend about an extra 8 hours on events. I have helped setup tables in local community events (in particular the hispanic event). I have also not accounted for the 5 hours i logged on the day of individual volunteering day. I wasn't feeling well that morning but i still went in. The work i have been doing is very community oriented. It is important the the office work is documented because Planned Parenthood needs stories to tell the press that make the organization even more valuable. This post also accounts for my last 4 hours of phone banking. My total hours up to now is:

Time: 53 Hours

Planned Parenthood


We’ve had some other dinners and get together but this was the final dinner to discuss the results. We had stopped the initiative throughout the whole nation, and all of our work had paid off. Keep in mind that I had so many stories documented of phone calls that were hilarious and sad at the same time, but I am going to try to incorporate them into my volunteership story. The work we did will have a significant impact on the whole nation and moments like this make me realize how important it is to preserve the work of Planned Parenthood.

Time: 36 Hours

Planned Parenthood


This is the last weekend we have to call voters before voting day. The phone calls are getting much more persuasive.  I am going to be working about 12 hours these next three days, and the pressure is on. There are some technical issues with the phone system. They switched to what they thought was a better system, but it was just too inefficient and not up to our standards. On the Saturday before voting, we had to stop making phone calls because the system could not handle our traffic. I am really glad that I made such an impact because if this initiative passes in Mississippi, it will be tried in other states and that is unacceptable.

Time: 28 Hours

Planned Parenthood


A lot of these days are starting to mesh together because our activities are very repetitive. This is my eighth time volunteering and I led the info session. I have gotten so good at phone banking that I make over 100 calls each time, and I am proving to be a very efficient phone banker. I love the community that we’re working in because they get my sense of humor. I am keen on making sure that this initiative fails because of all the time that we have put in. As we approach November 8th (D-Day) the phone calls are getting more and more intense. At the beginning of this initiative, we felt like we wouldn’t make an impact, but it seems as though the tables have turned in our favor.

Time: 16 Hours

Planned Parenthood


Today I got here a little early and started working one on one with Luis. We went over the fact that I am getting really good at phone banking, and he wants me to start leading the info sessions. I was really enthused with this idea, but I was worried that I hadn’t had enough experience yet. Today, I made over 90 calls and I feel like I am getting very persuasive now.  I am straying away from the script, which is proving to be helpful when trying to persuade someone who wants to vote for initiative 26.

Time: 12 Hours

Planned Parenthood


Today we are basically doing the same thing as Tuesday. We are using the My activate system to spread the word about Amendment 26. We have to sit through a 45 minute training every time but I can see it getting repetitive very soon. My goal today was to break 80 phone calls and I did it.  I’m getting pretty close with the mentors.  On a side note, the food is really legit. And the working environment is what I imagine to be working in. 


Time: 8 Hours

Planned Parenthood


Today was my first day volunteering with Planned Parenthood. Our goal of volunteering is trying to better the community. In this case, our community just so happens to be the whole nation. We are working with a national initiative to stop Amendment 26 from passing in the State of Mississippi. The method we used was phone banking. This is an efficient VOIP Internet calling system that places the calls for us. As phone bankers, our job is to speak to Mississippi Voters and persuade them to vote no on amendment 26. This was my first day, and I only made 70 calls, but I promise I will get better.

Time: 4 Hours